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A love for the unknown,
An understanding of what is,
A bitter laugh,
A touch of warmth.

A heart that yearns.

An unknown love,
A sworn supremacy,
And a humbleness.

All blends into a
Buzzing swarm of "life."

My love, I will not stay long
Farewell, for this world cannot suit me,
And I cannot suit the world.

And if there is no heaven,
And there is no hell,
I will find a different oxygen.

"God" and "Devil" weren't the things to worry about, my dear.


A bitter laugh.

They never, ever were.
©2007-2009 ~Starlit-Dark
:iconstarlit-dark:

Author's Comments

...The poetry category is very confusing to someone who has hardly an idea about said subject.

:|

Experimenting. Comments?

Edit: xD Thanks to =WaroDaBeast for noticing the error in the title~

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:icondarkprincessstar:
i like it

--
If you're happy and you know it, bash some heads,
If you're happy and you know it, slit some necks,
If you're happy and you know it,
Blood and gore will truly show it,
If you're happy and you know it, kill 'em dead.
~xXPinkLuvXx <-check 'em out!
:iconphu-phu-hugs-me:
Really lovely poem :claps:

I don't really know what it's about, but sounds a bit like romance (?_?) If it is, you could put it in Romance/open or whatever. If not, then the category is fine :nod:

Much love,
Jenny

--
Candy talks to strangers
Thinks her life's in danger
No one gives a damn about her hair

:G
:iconstarlit-dark:
Thank you very much! :D

Oh, not at all. xD It's...mostly about how this person simply comprehends too much, and yearns for something more than what the world has to offer her--as stated, she wonders about the unknown.

But thank you. ^^; I had no idea what most of those sub-categories are.
:iconphu-phu-hugs-me:
Hahas! Same here... I just go for General/Open :D

--
Candy talks to strangers
Thinks her life's in danger
No one gives a damn about her hair

:G
:iconstarlit-dark:
:XD: We just learned about poetry in class, but half of those in the categories weren't even covered.
:iconsasuke-x-hinata:
nice. I'm no good at poetry ^^;

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HyuUchihacest <33
:iconstarlit-dark:
Thank you!
Neither am I. Dx I'm not a big fan of it, either, but I needed something to do in Keyboarding class.
:iconpurplegeisha:
It's definitely interesting, like a story almost, though I didn't completely get it till I read your reply to :iconphu-phu-hugs-me: but yup, keep up the lovely work:nod:

--
...Enter Herr Surgeon,Take up the bowie knife
And play join the dots.

Vena Carver
Heart Starter
The Doctor is insane...

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